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Dance of a lifetime...

The sun of life has risen again
but why haven't you, li'l soul?

Just see the beautiful golden rays
penetrating through the skies;
don't they make you feel loved?
don't they lighten up that fire inside
when they touch your hidden desires?
think, just think...
if you could catch rays and keep with you forever
what would you have become by now?
wouldn't you have become a sun with golden rays?
now don't say you don't want to, li'l soul...

Just see the happy faces around you
seems like everyone is going home
don't they make you feel happy anymore?
don't they remind you of the moments
when you were blessed with the loveliest?
think, just think...
if you could hold moments and keep with you forever
what would you have got by now?
wouldn't you have become a life full of happiness and fun?
now don't say you don't want it too, li'l soul...

The sun and the life;
both keep on rising, both keep on falling
each has its own horizon to define
each has its own limits to shine
but when the good times come
(and believe me, they always come)
just let the rays of love, of life shine through
just let all happy faces to come to you
and do you know what you will then become?
now don't say you can't become the divine, li'l soul...

Look! the sun of life has risen again.
Come! let's go and dance into the golden light, li'l soul
and find that what you have been looking for throughout...
...that thing, your Divine Self.

Author notes

It is very easy to motivate others but very difficult to motivate oneself...
Life is full of happy and bad times but the ones who try to be happy in bad times also, in hope that the good times will also come are the ones who actually know how to live life fully..

I am not good at punctuation, any suggestions are most welcome.

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  • Denerica
    October 25

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    Yes we have to lift up others, those even less fortunate than ourselves as your words say and reach out about. I take it you are talking to children, like those less fortunate in the countries? Well done. Thanks for entering. Blessings.


    • mani1981
      October 25
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      Thanks a lot for your comments on the poem and many thanks for the honors. God Bless!!!


  • wildflowr
    October 24

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    interesting

    You keep saying little soul but souls don't seem to me as little. If you followed your soul maybe you wouldn't be trapped in w hat appears to be life and remain dissatisfied. thought provoking

    • mani1981
      October 24
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      Thanks for your comments!! You are right in saying that we need to listen to our soul but most of us don't do it...our minds keep us dragging back making it sort of impossible