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Free Will

God is the perpetual lover.
He loved and loved to love, so,
To give himself something to love,
He sang the world into being.

God is the perpetual optimist.
He sang sharps and flats
Into the sonata of humanity, but
He still believes we will do
The right thing,
Though everything else suggests otherwise.

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  • Cassandra Gemini
    October 24

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    You're just a little freak of proliferation tonight, aren't you? Well done. I like it a lot. The last line is my favorite.


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 24

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    he is the giver of all love life and an eternal soul.. I love the message and the way you penned hugs always Angel and thank you for sharing♥