I am his smile
I am his laugh
I am his broken heart
I am his wild eyes
I feel his pain
I share his joy
I cry his tears
I sing out his songs
I am a girl in love
That is where I stand
A contest entry
- Who are you? by Shakes-spear.
5500 points, ended November 7, 26 entries
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Comments
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very nice
I have four daughters and tell them all the time, not to lose themselves in their love interest. If you live and breath for another...you lose part of yourself. It's OK to love someone so much that you feel their feelings, but keep your own too! This is a very nice poem. Thank you for the entry, The Shaker
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I can really relate to this poem. This is fluent and there is not any awkward lines at all.
BRILLIANT
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THANKS ^_^
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