If ever I could write anything,
To make you understand....that with out you I'm drowning in quicksand...
That without you I'm alone,
Just another footprint in this wasted, tainted land...
If ever I could tell you Just how I feel,
I'd tell you how your love makes me fly
Like I'm soaring over fields up in the sky..
I'd tell you how your laugh makes me cry,
A joyous river of tears,And your smile...
Makes me high taking away all my fears,
I'd tell you how I love you and how its you,
I need to be with for the rest of my years....
If only I could show you,
How amazing you really are, How every word you say to me,
Sends me straight to the stars...
How every simple "I love you "
Brings me to my knees and puts me on mars...
If ever I could write anything,
To help you understand,
My love for you runs deeper than the oceans and land.
I'd write you a song, form a rock n' roll band,
And you would be my audience,
Before which I will always stand...
If ever I could tell you Just how I feel,
I'd tell you "I love you",
And its my heart you did steal...
I'd tell you without you there's nothing,
Without you I can't just deal,
I'd tell you How you are my world,
How I love being your girl...
If ever I could show you ,
How truly amazing you really are...
I'd show you the sun the moon and the stars..
I'd show you the love you've given me,
How you've healed my deepest scars...
If I could tell you just how I feel,
I'd tell you I love you and other than us,
There's nothing in this world more real...
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Dedicated to my Future Husband Steven J. Mosley who gave me bak my heart and inspiration. Thank you My Love.
Comments
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Love... always an easy subject
Hi, I see you have requested some comments...
I write very similarly to how this poem is written, and through time, I kind of feel that too much rhyming takes the reader's attention from the meaning of the poem. If you'd really love to touch someone's heart with your imagery, I would advise longer lines with less rhyming, or at least a regular, constructive rhyme scheme. The last point contradicts the feeling of love though right? Cos it flows without an order...
Hope I've been somewhat helpful,
Nicole.

