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Such Is The Storm Of My Soul

With a cold sunset,
A dark gust
On this winter day
Such is the storm of my soul

Torn with regret and betrayal,
A cold fire burning from my loins,
A cold frost on my heart
Such is the storm of my soul

A scream, loud, from a hilltop,
Bloodcurdling and vicious,
Colder than Hell,
Such is the storm of my soul

A hermit, alone, in the woods,
Surrounding by nothingness
Only himself to keep company
Such is the storm of my soul

And it gets worse,
Daily, hourly, secondly,
Depression hidden
Such is the storm of my soul

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  • shattered.frisco
    October 25
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    Congratulations on the trophy, well deserving. and a very nicely penned poem!

  • Torn with regret and betrayal,
    A cold fire burning from my loins,
    A cold frost on my heart
    Such is the storm of my soul this line is great

    beautiful flowing talent this is an amazing piece u have here i love every bit of it good luck in the contest!

    -Mary-