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A New Moonlight

Leaves they settled in my mind
when the wind move my words
down my endless thoughts
like fields far they go
capturing the sensations of him
a sweet sunny moon
shimmering calm and quiet
breathtaking view was his
eyes that sung this verse
upon the quiet shores of
my eyes

a blue bird would fly pass
or my head every once in awhile
and drop messages of sweet notes
of my heart loving him
and wishing he was here
though this other man, not of
my dreams, words were
never heard of so then
I could not read a thing
like a honey nectar that would be
soon cough by the waiting bees
they stung  my lovely heart
with his taunting
features and his unheard
manliness with other men that
slept like a carpet underneath my feet
an earth princess he was not my earth
prince where love could not meet

just wanted to wet my beautiful night
with a taste of romantic passion to grow
some love to blooms in my spirit fields
though would not come true
I only watered them before the time stop
and I Cinderella was no longer in
a dream

that day I said "Goodbye"
would be somewhat of
a beautiful rainy season
when the day would be new
and my heart would
rejuvenate and it would be
all so beautiful again
of course









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  • csmmoms2
    October 24

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    I felt like I was reading Sonnetts of the Portuguese. -c