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Autumn Leaves

Autumn
leaves are changing
falling softly to ground
piles of softness all around
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  • Peteskid gold member
    November 29, 2009

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    ahh yes, the time of children to use the piles as wonderful toys tospend happy hours tossing and rolling... a memory for many...Pk


  • azure85 gold member
    November 7, 2009

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    That was the scene today as I was raking the yard! A very seasonal cinquain and a delight to read, thank you so much!

  • Pogo7747
    November 5, 2009
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    Cool. The ending is wonderful


  • whispersoftly
    November 5, 2009

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    Love it

    I love Crunching leaves underfoot this time of year, so beautifully written keep writing x Cheryl


  • Simply Olivia
    October 25, 2009

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    I love this!
    Reminds me of an old photo (that I have, somewhere); my son, when he was young, and his little playmates sitting in a pile of Autumn leaves.


  • Lizzie-Moffat
    October 24, 2009
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    And this is why AUTUMN IS THE MOST AWESOME SEASON!

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