Autumn
leaves are changing
falling softly to ground
piles of softness all around
jump in!
Author notes
Picture inspired for contest
A contest entry
- Cinquaintly Fall by azure85.
1100 points, ended November 7, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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ahh yes, the time of children to use the piles as wonderful toys tospend happy hours tossing and rolling... a memory for many...Pk
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That was the scene today as I was raking the yard! A very seasonal cinquain and a delight to read, thank you so much!
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Cool. The ending is wonderful
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Love it
I love Crunching leaves underfoot this time of year, so beautifully written
keep writing x Cheryl
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I love this!
Reminds me of an old photo (that I have, somewhere); my son, when he was young, and his little playmates sitting in a pile of Autumn leaves. -
And this is why AUTUMN IS THE MOST AWESOME SEASON!
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