come on we must hurry
they will be arriving soon.
do you have the thermos
and your hat and scarf ?
ok they are here .
look at the horses , they are beautiful
and listen to the songs
already being sang.
oh the christmas holday brings so much cheer
especialy for the children each and every year.
the slay ride is tradition
but for some its all brand new
and around every cornor
there is always a wintery view.
hot chocolate and cider
is shared with loving care
untill the trail runs to its end and our destanation now in view.the bond fires glowing
oh what a pretty sight
there is people singing carrols
and children play in chase
and marsh mellows roasting
all singing favorite tunes
and its oh so much fun
and goes on untill its late
A contest entry
- Holiday Traditions by Emerald Lass.
750 points, ended October 24, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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excellent
Brings out the cheery side of Christmas. Paints a beautiful picture. Don

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Beautiful
The imagery of your words paint a beautiful picture of the joys of winter. I look forward to the coming season but I must confess I look forward to its end as well.
Thank you for sharing your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann


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Oh I wish it was Christmas already, such a delightful poem dear, I really enjoyed the read! Well done on the trophy win, much deserved!

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What wonderful memories this brought back and It just gives you a warm fuzzy all over. Great poem.


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this is fab raggy ,invoking lovelt christmas feelings..well done on bronze x


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A soft and sweet piece to welcome the season as it approaches. Thoughtful write, constructively I will say there are a few spelling errors throughout - though still a well composed piece. Nicely done!

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very sweet. lovely sentiment.

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thank you so much
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i love christmas and this really made me feel the christmas spirit. nice job!

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thank you for reading
bless you
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What a happy, precious poem this is!
Thank you for honoring my contest with this beautiful moment from Christmastime's happiness.
I love the ideas of outdoor fun during the holidays and this is a perfect example of family togetherness!


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thank you this was fulll of warm memories for me
bless you
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