Am I sleeping?
I cannot see your eyes
But is that really normal,
or is it all a lie?
Am I waking,
or is my mind just lighting up?
Is this freedom,
or do the bound get all the luck?
With nothing strong for answers
one can hardly see what's true
Is this right,
or am I just as lost as you?
Have I died,
or has it only just begun?
You don't think so
Are we still the same as one?
A sound
A gentle whisper on the breeze
Never-mind
It was just the hollow trees
Am I choking,
or is it just hard to breathe ?
Tell me
Is it really time to leave?
No
My pessimism bleeds right through
But drips of thoughts
Aren't always true
Are you even reading?
Are you still awake?
Have you brought another promise
With a ribbon of mistake?
My eyes are sticking
Staying shut
But now I see the truth
There's no such thing as luck
Am I sleeping?
There's light inside my eyes
But is that really normal,
or is it all a lie.....
Author notes
Say what you will, as long as it is what you REALLY think.
Comments
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This is brilllant! Truly! This really got me thinking. I love how you used metaphors and different ways of writing this. Great job ((as always!))


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I like the spacing of this write. It adds emphasis.
Great job :]



