The time we jumped off the long pier,
with all our clothes on, huffing the sweet harbor air.
I swear to god that's all I needed
sweet euphoria of nirvana the perfect treatment.
And you said just one more sunset
& things will get better, I swear
But I saw the tears swell up
like balloons popping from your quivering eyes.
Baby, this road ended a long time ago.
It's over and I don't know what to say,
you promised me everything
and gave me nothing.
But, you keep walking down this same trotted road,
that I can't seem to even find.
I can stand here in this same place for hours,
contemplating the silhouette person you wear.
"Is it too soon to say goodbye?" you asked,
and my tongue burned to ashes.
Blowing away in the wind, leaving my mouth
dry and unable to speak.
& I screamed and yelled until my mind turned sober,
he took my hand and pulled me into him and said "Easy baby, it's October"
Please tell me what you think
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the last lines were amazing but just to make it flow better:
& I screamed and yelled until my mind turned sober,
when he took my hand to pull me in, saying
"Easy baby, it's October,".
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thanxxx!! ilyyy<3 yahz it is a lil choppy though, idk lotssa thoughts=]
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