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All We Know is Falling

julie fell off the side of a mountain the way some people
dive off the high board;
gracefully.
head.
first.

julie can’t move her arms but she
holds us together.

julie fell off the side of a snowy mountain
the way everyone seems to
fall out of our lives;
without warning,
quickly,
gone.

the way i appreciate the cramps in my feet,
the way i love my funny bone,
the way it feels
to hurt;

these are the things julie forgets first.

but not me.

not.
me
.

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  • philosphyofkate
    October 23

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    oh my. you just keep getting better and better. this is just incredible. i want to read lots of your poetry so i can improve as well. or expand my horizons. look at the world differently. feel beautiful.


    • Jettison
      October 28
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      thanks, kate. i'm giving you the classic half smile.