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Tears

The tears fell,
As you had your fun,
But enjoy yourself cause this is your last run,
I will no longer be your toy,
My pain will no longer be your joy,
I will never let another tear fall,
Because this last tear will be all,
A tear so black to match your heart,
Darkness that could tear someone apart,
You will no longer hold me down,
You will no longer push me around,
I will be a strong independent woman,
Ill make you regret treating me like this
And show you what could have been,
Ill show you how strong a woman I can be,
I will make sure you will see,
And I will make sure if you want to come back,
The next tears you see will be from me laughing.

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  • eternalsol
    November 17
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    right on this is whow i fell to thanx so much for entering