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life and love

life seems so complicated
when one finds their love
its someone else to worry about
someone else to share the load
but what to do when they put up a wall?
do you leave them to fend for themselves?
even if they have no one else to care for them?
could you even if you should???

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been a while since i've written anything, and had somethings to work out...

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  • Devine.identity
    November 9

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    awesome possum

    You need love to have a full life in my opinion, yet you need a life to have love,
    need one with out the other, can't be born unless there is love, and can't make life unless there is love...
    Great write,
    When someone puts up a wall, you fight to tear that wall down,
    Dont leave them alone, you are there to help you can always find a way,
    You can't leave its the hardest thing to do in life, so stay stong,

    Even though you havn't written in a while , you still can express your self and the only thing now is to write more and make them longer,
    Goodjob, I want more