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Before its too late

Your standing there like you don't even care
Your pushing me away and  its not fair
It's all a mistake
But am i too late?
I trusted you with everything
Now i know what trust can bring
Heartache and tears is just what i'll gain
Don't let it happen like that
Please take away the pain
Talk to me now
We'll make it somehow
I want it to work
So stop being a jerk

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