Nature-
Intricate design
Of advanced simplicity
Much greater than ours
Author notes
Inspired by the saying:
"Nature is more advanced than people.
Every snail has a home.”
– Lu Wong
A contest entry
- How Profound... One quote endless possibilities! by Concrete Angel.
700 points, ended November 9, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Your thoughts on my ramblings, dear readers?
Comments
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Short, sweet to the point but as always it was wonderfully done. and yes neature is much more advanced the n people always have been always will be they adapt and change while people change but very seldom really adapt. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest dear one.
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Fantastic! I think this one will really inspire the reader to stop and think just what it is about nature that is so much greater than we are. I think it's due to the fact that nature is much bigger and more delicate than we can comprehend, not to mention it has had millions of years to advance itself to its current state whereas we humans have only been at it for thousands of years lol. Anyway, that was my little ramble of what this poem made me think about
I love that you use "intricate design"... there are so many intricate things in nature that we look past everyday and that line alone is what got me started on my thinking and my rambling lol. Anyway, I loved this! Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!
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