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[Cyclical Rendezvous]

Cyclical rendezvous
Promotes the evergreen
My void fills not with pity
But with perspective
Excuse my denial of humanity

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Prompt: "Nature is more advanced than people. Every snail has a home."--Lu Wong

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  • toomysterious
    October 23
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    Love the title, an intriguing concept and so much truth in the words.


  • Concrete Angel silver member
    October 23

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    Oooo I like this one. The whole idea of a "cyclical rendevouz" to me is the idea of the evergreen... never dying, everlasting, renewing itself day after day. There is a lot of depth and meaning in the words that you wrote that I think forces the reader to stop and ponder what you have said.
    "My void fills not with pity
    but with perspective"
    Wow... those two lines alone speak wolumes to what we should feel upon looking out at our world. And your closing line, I think, adds the lightest touch of humor, while it is at the same time a very true statement for one who respects nature... anyway, that's everything I got out of this
    Great meaning throughout! Loved it! Thanks for entering and good luck in my contest!