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rising with the dawn




rising with the dawn
a wheat field


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  • Swan song gold member
    October 24

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    an excellent two line poem and it does have a good affect the way you wrote it!!! Thank you for your entry it was excellent


  • Draig aine gold member
    October 23
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    perfect