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Nothing Needed

Nature needs no makeup,
nature has no lust,
nature is all beauty,
every speck of dust.

Author notes

For the last line I was trying to think of rhyming words for must looked at the corner of the wall, saw a dusty spider web and new it was fate.

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  • Virgo silver member
    October 26

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    beautifully writen and very nice as well
    good luck in your contest
    you wrote with a simple flow and great beauty


  • toomysterious
    October 23

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    Beautiful in its simplicity. Your words speak volumes. Good luck in your contest.

  • yourguardianangel
    October 23

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    Good job with this. Your rhyme is not at all overpowering. Bravo.


  • Concrete Angel silver member
    October 23

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    It must be fate if the first thing you saw to inspired that great last line was a dusty ol' spider web
    I really like this... I like that it's only four lines and truly speaks volumes... you have taken nature and laid it out for us to view in a light that is showing us nature ir nature and should be appreciated as such. I also happen to love that this rhymes because I think it adds a nice flourish to the depth of the words. Great write! Love it! Thanks for entering and good luck in the contest!

  • Shakespeare4Christ
    October 23

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    Fascinating! I love the perfect rhyme of lines 2 and three.
    The meaning is phenomenal. Great poem!

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