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Demoralized.

The guilt of a smile
The hidden scars I bare
Feeling all lost
You have nothing to compare.

A laugh seems strange
As it falls from my lips
All dusty and bizarre
Even to myself

Guilty as sin
Convicted more than once
The feeling of life
Is an unfamiliar touch

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  • cheyannesorrow
    October 25
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    Amazing

    wow i really like this

  • n.e.o.n
    October 24

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    This is an excellent piece you have here. I really enjoyed this. The rhyming is wonderful. Nice expression of emotion. Well done and I will add you so I can read more.

  • wow! t really like this..the emotion in it and i really can relate to it....great write!


  • PinkeyPromise
    October 23
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    wow this is really good for ur first write on here.