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Black Ice

Trapped under ice,
I am fighting for my life.
The things that surround me
Are unknown.

My enemies are disguised
By the thick fog that surrounds me.
The only knowlegde that I have
Is that my feet are on the ground,
And I am alone in this fight.
God hascome halfway.
Now it's time for my last stand,
An effort to save myself.

My path is nothing but black ice,
The obstacles lay hidden
And waiting for a chance to strike.

By far, my most dangerous journey.

I fear nothing but what is inside myself.
I fear I will see the moster I truly am.
I fear that I am broken beyond repair.

... Imagine that.
The one who can sole anyone's problems...
Unfixable.

This journey sobegins,
As Itake the step to find
All the pieces of my own shattered soul.

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  • okadadokie
    October 24
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    Awesome write Poetic, it flows very well, good depth also

    ~Oka


  • CareBearKilla
    October 24
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    Wow...This is absolutely amazing.
    I'm speechless, its THAT great.
    i don't know what to say, other than, Fantastic job