Multiple Ids
The site invites around the usual hours
and logged is on
hours kept and spent
in a time budget
pretty tight and high strung.
Before long comes the mate
with whom a lot has
been said to sate
trace him or her down
for a smile or frown
idea strikes
check him her on.
Born is another id
as the existing one gets too recognized
and slidy
with that on you begin again
the checking game
he she is pretty new
or all the same.
In more cases than not
he she is not
frown depression sets
he she was not what we thought
does about the same with all he she met
frown and frown
in multiple ids
you drown.
move on..dear move on..for a dance when your depression is gone!
Daily Timing
Slot is fixed
they log on
one from here
other from there
they mull and cull
depending upon age
and the going rage
young ones predominate
their favorite is
love lost
and love found
some are wise
they come for a rise
to hook one forever
the other is wiser still
he is funning forever
before he ditches
her in a sewer
dance is on
keyboards jingle
with hard pants
and some do rant
graphics flash abound
typing is careful
decorated
and on a song
till the feet
turn sticky(with what hmmm)
and the breath
hard turns routine
all subdued
and sounding same
daily timing
is not rhyming
all pretty soon
time for change
stitch the gape
and powder
the scraped
and move on.
Next person has the time appointment....a steamy slot.....grinning ear to ear!
Deception
This is it
my soul mate
this is my rate
on this seventh date
I adore you
and love you so
never did before though
guess you are a friend and
not a foe
lets dance on
this floor
that dances
right with us
heavens move
with your groove
as we puff huff coo
episode over
and in the town
they are all over
sights move as do feet
and pretties always greet
prettier greets faster
and one looses no time
in getting about
like well set plaster
the same sequence is done
the first ten lines or so
of this caper
and if sighted
it is deception
otherwise
she and he
remain
in a mode
that's called
dancing
reception
waiting to be ripped apart by acrimony of discovery!
Deception makes one learn many dance forms..............ahemmmmm!
Knitting the three above together.....over net sighting is done through multiple ids and time slots if found unoccupied as one remains invisible, leads to conclusion of Deception...hahahahaha
Religious Hypocrisy
Religions are lofty
but usually limited in time in our life
on an appointed day or hour or days
they have turned technical and reference points
here were witnessed as defense mechanisms.
I do not know why I was given these prompts
but they have been and they are linked
time slots and daily timings
were helped by religion all along
when retreating and changing to other time slot
religion would cover the user more
words became guarded and cautious
they quoted religion copious
while earlier they acted like whore
religion dawned and gnawed now
and was brought about by the sermon quoting new
time slot change
thus religion became a talk decorous
for new introduction
while they spooked and confused
bored at the sudden change
old one fled to hell
not even trying to yell
while new one saw
the gaping thaw
clothes uncovered
and more
by the whore
timorous and slick
she did the next flick
swearing to old ones
nothing was more
it was just a religion store
with the enlightened one.
this is rather sexed for she
but is equally true of he
when they moved on
to next tee
they used religion
as cover
and went other way
to hover
leaving a trail
of depression and frustration
like an in house infestation.
Many affected saw the game
shocked they tried to move on
those who did not see
are still paying the steep fee.
Another variant was
acting ids with many religions
in background
as part of multiple ids
to target relevant constituency
of lay and innocent
inventing background stories
and ensnaring like gory
time permitting
this continued
till it could
or till tedium
sent the
id cold.
PS: Religion talks can help restrain a speeding conversation quite a bit and make it philosophical. It can also lead to a feeling of identity.....and make for steamy talks that emerge out of such heartfelt conversations. Thus, it is a brake as well as an accelerator-defense mechanism lies in how and with whom you use it as such.These are general observations please do not attribute to anyone or yourself...there is world besides you as well.
Three Timing
Has three obviously
or more
but that's not manageable
even if you are very able
never know some are born extra gifted
grins.
one dame two guys
two guys one dame
or three of a kind
for different kind
one pair is seen in confidence
and kept as rallying point
while they amble across
for the fun and the change
playing musical chairs
in time slots.
This lasts more
as confidence makes that sure
if one falls cold
due to tedium and bore
the confidence pair
rallies
and enlists a new one
they last
as ever before
the arrangement crumbles
when confidential one
gets reduced to shambles
for reasons known or whatever
leaving again
a disaster
of frustration and bone plaster
now construction is to done
of a network
totally gone
it was hard to pair two
we are talking about three.
Revenge
Now ,that is dangerous and risky word
very broad and frightens like hell
sending the target all scared pell mell
in real life meaning the world
here, at this site the implications are less
because limited is the opportunity to mess.
All you can do is defavour a friend who has done you the same
or,stop commenting and ignoring as the first tier revenge
irrespective of whatever made the two of you shed the tears
then comes the second tier revenge with more effect
that is used when you are more peeved.
Here in this, a variety of weapons are used
one, you exclude and remove from groups
the one with you have a cudgels to break
then, you track him or her
in contest entries and persuade
with the holder that no prizes are vend
citing and begging social nearness
or a desire to get back all
then, more irate ones
go about leaving work comments that stink
which still make you think
and make your nose shrink
As a last resort
avenger cooks up a complaint
and send it to site saint
who either banishes
or covers all in reconciliatory
paint.
Episode revenge over and someone changes Id and skunks
Ephemeral Damnation
Somewhere, I do not feel complete
half and less and guilty
possessed by an afterthought
he she was such a nice soul
after all
better than the one
that, I have at present
this he she wants just that
or else gets in a spat
I feel stuck
and have to maintain
as a dignity
challenge
and as a melange
True I had tossed the poor him her
away like a ball
kind of axed the ex
so cruel and bad
so what, if we did feel routine
it was heartfelt and satin
so heartfelt and full
heart strings pull
this cow still needs that warm bull
guess bull would say yes and now
unless he is cosy with other cows
this burns and don't know why
make me believe that it is yet real and true still
sleep eludes
and eyelashes turn heavy
heart weeps
and stomach has butterflies
underneath I feel dirty and used
I pass time with this pathetic
who is a duplicate
and not an authentic
and is moving on
and to hide the wound
I write that I am letting
him her move on
where are you my love
I know
it is hard to go back
once you agreed on a sack
God was behind
and is ahead
and existence is doomed
damnation of ephemeral kind
is truly well read.
PS:Nights are spent in guilt ridden eyelashes refusing to wink.....morning brings in another Id -the kind the old one gets attracted to
Ramifications
Young and bashful
full of energy and verve
opportunity seeker
pleasure
I did
prefer.
Something wanted
to be experienced
something wanted
to get seen
Having did that
I find it is all the same.
Maturities and wisdom
clash and ego helps
whenever I moved on
a divide was on
remorse
guilt
was built.
But curiosity
kills and makes one live
I am standing
on another chasm
looking at the two
that are brewing
and boiling
like
hot stew.
My emotions strewn
and nerves rankled
emotions haywire
and heart beating
eyes staring
lips dry
I have forgotten
how to gather
energy
and leap
over this divide
I did last time
and barely survived
was about to fall
to my death
now
I see
my wreaths
I want to run
under that sun
where you stood
with arms open
I would not mind
the two chasms
that I created
still being there
I would jump
and come to
you
shining and new.
PS: ramification seems to be tired and exhausted and longing to get back to where you seemed to have moved on in curiosity.....grinning.
Author notes
in multiple ids
you drown.
Well most of these poems were deliberately written from the perspective of realtionships as it was considered best for understanding the concepts and prompts.Many other perspectives could have been assumed.Under no circumstances, should any of these poems should be attributed to any individual including the author. These poems represents the feedback feelings in interactions with several site members and thus- THERE IS HUGE WORLD BESIDES YOU!.......lol
Please tell me what you think
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Great muse here
Yes indeed this was most entertaining and I see you used words from the prompts to create the writtings above .Let me see what I can do now .
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I have no criticisim
I did'nt understand it all but could not stop reading none the less, so compelling like swimming having to come up for air every few strokes but not being able to stop until you reach the end. Its the same thing when Ive read a Terry Pratchet book. compelling and driven I luv it But I will have to read it a few times more me thinks. thankyou another amazing write. TB.x
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Well.skg..The whole jist I get out of your write is the come on's that go on here and elsewhere...Alot of snare's here....You keep mentioning getting over depression after a break up of these relationships...I think it is true as some their whole world is their world here...and trust is the issue..
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far too long for my liking and like terrimacs comment says "too personal to not be personal"
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thanks dear
its is about 10 poems not one..in the garb of single
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Great
good job at tying all those together and making a most interesting and fun read, Great write I loved reading it -
wonderful k
Kool Poem/Write =), you have a unique style of writing, this was marvelous to read , you have an astonishing way of thinking and writing, i liked sections three timing and revenge, keep up the good work =).
byyyyyyyyyye k
Fairy Princess k =) 
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I must be living in my own world. A lot of this I didn't know existed. Guess I'm not hip. I like the displays and examples here. Well chosen words and deep meanings. You have a varied outlook. Good job.
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WOOHOO
Well thought out and much time sent to see what there is in each thought. It is a lot but well worth the read. Wonderful Write!!!!!!
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2 much 4 me 2 absorb
2 many ids......couldn't keep all them in a proper perspective to honestly critique each of them individually.....especially since they were relating to relationships of individuals on the website......sorry sgking123......applauds for your effort.....LP&H
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Well this was interesting. I like how you divided it up into the different sections.
•*~♥Dax♥~*•
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I still don't understand how you write a Caper. Do we keep our own style of writing or use yours?
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puff huff coo
I read great lines, and rhymes. Deception - very cool. I enjoyed all of this. I will read them again later today. Love the line breaks, "big words." I've not been around long enough to need multiple id's, so I am not drowning.
It's not all about me? Dang!
I have come back and read this again as one piece.
For me, this reminds me the Yah place, but there is only poetry here.
Very interesting indeed, the way you have made your word choices fit your view of AP folks.
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Daughter of Night
wow it was long but worth every moment of my time to read it
i like your perspective in this everything was well written and had
a meaning to it great job
sincerly,
angel
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Honestly I couldnt get through the whole thing.. it seemed extremely long.
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Interesting....
Very long, so many valid points, not only the obvious ones associated with social cyber networking, but metaphorically could be interpreted into every day life. Enlightening for sure, I enjoyed your "Under no circumstances, should any of these poems should be attributed to any individual including the author," a way to vent without repercussion. (Hopefully) I enjoyed reading very much, hit some points of inspiration, thank you!
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shaken off at asterisks in scrolling longer content~
mutual approval isn't immediately going to be by cognizant zaps of filtered words at least on my account, to keep counting opinionated tremors among mine at this time lol to lull into poetry.
sorry I couldn't stay to say more,
carolyn
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wow this is really outstanding...the first of its kind iive read yet..really lovved it...great job...it speaks lengths that dont have words to describe how perfect this is written
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its good, but the rhyming is so forced and labored it detracts from the piece as a whole.
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Wow, I am speechless for words. This was a very emotional and powerful write.
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If I am to be honest I found it too long - some very insightful considerations in here but also some just lost me - I realise you say in your AN it cannot be attributed to anyone including the author - but as I read it I find it is too personal not be personal if that makes sense - too much insight. A very deep read but will need to reread because of the length
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as I know what this write is about it makes it easier for me to understand
8 poems in 1 is what we set and words you lit upon the page I read each line with open heart and understood them all with fear and hope. Now the end is nigh for all our Capers lets just hope epic poems abound well done you what a write lol 
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Wow!, Amazing!
Thats really great too! : ) its really really long, and really really really good! I really enjoyed. I just loved it: ) it would take me over a hundred years to write one poem half as good as this one! : P -
in multiple ids you drown. Your author notes help, but I got a little lost on the religion sector and will have to pay more attention to the message within. I couldn't decide if you speak of creeds and doctrines, or simply the facade of Sundays as the rest of the week wanes in human passions.
Now faith is the substance of things hoped for, the evidence of things not seen, and I think if we ask amiss, we receive amiss, too. At any given moment, that remains the same...so attention is prerequisite.
This sir, deserves more consideration, and I'm impressed at the thought you put into it.
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i find this hard to understand what it is you are telling us, maybe i need to reread it over and over until something clicks or even better if you reply, enlighten me
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whoa, lots to ponder in this...demands multiple reads. I like it because of the crazy language used in different ways and because it makes the reader think. I've never used multiple ids and dislike them very much. nice to see a poem about them and relationships, which are as complicated as this poem, perhaps Nice work!
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this is very long but it well worth the read , the part that pulled dme in the most was Deception, to me it was hinding your true self or their true self until it was to late for the other to realize. Very well done
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Very nice flow on this one. =}
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till the feet
turn sticky(with what hmmm)
those lines give me pause....
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when one changes id's and decides to go on,hopefully both accept and go on and pretend the other does not exist...that is my moto
good luck on this
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