Lonely words scrolled on the screen,
A conversation of nothing.
I couldn't focus.
Not long enough to care what was being said.
I was stuck in a rut,
A pit of despair.
Crying out, helplessly.
You climbed into the hole i was in
So i wouldn't be alone.
And until then.
We were strangers.
You gave me hope,
When i had none.
You held my hand,
When i would let no one else close.
Not because I asked.
But because you wanted to.
I held on tightly
and let go two too many times.
And yet everytime,
You'd grab my hand and hold it
Tighter than you ever did before.
I blinked.
My eyelids closed for a little too long
And i went blind.
But only temporarily.
And once they opened again.
It was as though I was seeing for the first time.
You've made me feel,
And helped me see,
You're the light at the end
Of this long, dark tunnel.
[Christopher,
I know I haven't made this easy.
And I feel unworthy of your love.
Somehow, you see in me
Something that no one else does.
Show me. I both want and need
To see it for myself.
So, I'm asking you to show me.
And I'm hoping it takes forever.
♥♥♥]
A contest entry
- Good Bye AP, Goodbye my Friend. by Wrench-X.
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Comments
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i can totally relate to this poem. great write.
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Wow... That was really powerful to me. It was well written and full of emotion. I truly enjoyed it! Keep writting
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wow, i loved this. it sort of reminded me of my bestfriend and I... well good luck with everything, and keep writing.
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This was a very well written piece of work you have here. In some parts is was moving too me. But hey that is just me. This was amazing. Good luck in the contestand keep up the good work.
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