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Midnight Rendezvous

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Candlelight and violins,

bub'ling waters rendezvous

on a winter night of sparkle

snowflakes all around

 

Bordeaux upon lips,

Intoxicated In premonitions

of unspoken confessions,

suspended In time against

the velvet canvas of night

 

 

A toasting to the season,

softly caressing lips;

the scent of wine

warms the scent of seduction

 

 

 

 

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add a verse between the following and create a title;

Candle light and violins,
bub'ling waters rendezvous
on a winter night of sparkle,
snowflakes all surround

A toasting to the season,
softly caressing lips;
the scent of wine
warms the scent of seduction















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  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 24
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    excellent work

    impressed..


  • plainoljoe
    October 24
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    supberb background and verse addition
    thanks,

    Joe


  • twelfthknight silver member
    October 23

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    This is beautiful I love the picture and the background they really show off the poem. I think your middle stanza worked wonderfully Best of luck in the contest

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