The leaves
bind
winding their way
suffocating
starving oxygen
obliterating
Suns' healing rays
depriving
And I
wither
within coated green
tomb
Invisible, dying
slowly
adorned and pretty
dead
Author notes
R E V E L L E R
A contest entry
- My first Contest by TecumsehRoz.
700 points, ended November 6, 87 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Another good write. This was a very interesting piece in my opinion. The imagery was good, and the poem overall was amazingly short and sweet as sugar.
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And I
wither
within, coated green
tomb
I like that! very powerful and with so few words thats a great thing to be able to do !
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Wow! Fantastic --adorned and pretty....dead. Very powerfully stated and beautifully poetic! This is a great piece of writing!
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