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thievery in the existence of stepmothers.

And we took a tumble, perhaps a stumble into slow motion snow and we were face up. Just laying there watching birds fly above us, swooping in and picking up little, mediocre insects for a quick bite to eat and it made me think of New York, where if you're small, your head is just right for the mouth of a carnivore who's hungry for nothing to do.

And we'd wear tiaras together, imagining what it'd be like to slip from grace, dancing in the ever after and watching as the wicked stepmother was beheaded for reasons unknown....

After all, it was you and I who stole things and had her framed for it all.




And we were mischievous but happy darlings...

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Don't much care for it. Just came to mind. Love it or DQ it. haha.

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  • Kathraina gold member
    October 26

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    aww i love the litte tale you've woven here! it reminded me of my little sister C"= fantastic imagery, and oh so very creative take on the prompt love it!


    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 26

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    A great insight to your thoughts
    Detailed stanza to take us into an onward journey that gave it an edge so different
    I fed on it
    best wishes and good luck

    Julie


  • Brigid-goddess
    October 25

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    I actually really enjoyed this one! Made me think of my own childhood and all is "glory"
    Keep it up.


  • February Moon gold member
    October 24

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    Bahhh, I don't care if you don't like this. I liked it.


  • Not-The-Sun
    October 24

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    Love it or DQ it? well for one, I'm not the judge so I am forced to love this jkjk I love it anyway; and for two, you should be more proud of your works : ) no way in hell would Kath DQ this simply because you don't think it's your best >.<

    I really loved the imagery in this; I could picture it word for word, and it was beautiful creative way to go from the prompt! wonderfully penned : )


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 23

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    and the rest of the story lives on in never never land.. love this dear one for you just penned a little piece of spice in my life to read enjoyable hugs always Angel♥

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