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Fearful [Rictameter]



Fearful
of what’s coming
very soon down the pike
Even though I work to prepare
I feel so inept to deal with the pain
that I know I’ll experience
when I am confronted
with what I am
Fearful




Words: K.Botka
10/23/09

Author notes

Mt 10:28 And fear not them which kill the body, but are not able to kill the soul: but rather fear Him which is able to destroy both soul and body in hell.
Lu 12:7 But even the very hairs of your head are all numbered. Fear not therefore: ye are of more value than many sparrows.
32 Fear not, little flock; for it is your Father's good pleasure to give you the kingdom.

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  • Denerica
    October 26

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    Oh boy me too, an awareness, the wonderful fear of the Lord and His judgements, inspiring and true. Excellent. Blessings.


    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      October 26
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      It's always such a pleasure when a Bible student reads my inspirations & understands! The contest host didn't 'get it'.


  • Stickboy gold member
    October 24

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    I understand that fear.... perfect form on this , you did a great job... best of luck in the contest
    Sean

    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      October 25
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      Sean. I'm a Bible Student [Scholar] for more than 20 years & do my best to overcome. Knowing what's to take place shortly fills me with dread as I know I'll be seeing all that's lacking in me even more than now. I pray that I'll be worthy to rise to meet Him in the clouds in whatever form I may be in at that time [rising from the dead or alive].
      That I have an Anxiety Disorder & am Poly-phobic causes me much angst. I pray about this daily. Thanks for your read & comment.


  • The Reapers Angel
    October 23

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    Hmm... I think I missed the point of this, making it not flow as well as it could've.
    I love the rictameter style, but for how short this is though, I needed more descriptive words. The emotion was there but not enough imagery for me.
    Thank you for entering.

    ~Angel

    • Kathleen a Nazarene
      October 25
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      Perhaps if you were a Bible Student [Scholar] as I & you read the AN [which I could have lengthened quite a bit for reference] you'd understand. For me this is quite descriptive. Guess you just have to be seeing it from my point of view. Thanks for the contest which helped to bring this about! I've an Anxiety Disorder & so this is a big issue for me.

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