Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

This Is Our Time

Waking in the afternoon,
eyes open to the sight of you,
    but it was just the mist of my last dream,
I reach out to claim a kiss,
only to realize i've missed,
    and a dream is all that it has ever been.

As a child laying in my bed,
trying to play a movie in my head,
    but we both know that reality's much more,
the dreams are nice but they're not real,
I need something that I can feel,
    and you're exactly what i've been looking for.

Just in time you stopped my fate,
pulled me back from heavens gate,
    the blood runs dry but my heart it still remains,
when my breathing fully ceases
and my soul tears to a million pieces,
    I hope you never have to feel that pain.

It all started with with a look,
but that first kiss it got me hooked,
    and now I never ever want to leave,
something broke my heart today,
the moment that you walked away,
    my chest tightened and I swear I could not breathe.

I hate it when we have to part,
I wish that time I could restart,
    just so I could always be with you,
the love I feel is not a lie,
it'll follow me until I die,
    and everything I feel I know is true.




Author notes

Rhyme Scheme-
A
A
B
C
C
B

Well Ilanna you told me I had 24 hours to write you something, so here's the poem I promised you.

I love you.

You have an opinion, speak it.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Broken Thoughts
    October 23

    Edit | Reply
    aww babe, i love it its amazinnngg, and you got it on here within the limit so now i wont eat you , AHAHA.