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I guess this is the last letter I'll ever send you.

Tinselpool
October 23, 2009

"I guess this is the last letter I'll ever send you.
I gave you my whole heart, every drop of my love.
But obviously my whole heart wasn't enough for you.
So you dumped the whole pitcher out- now it's empty.

I know you won't reply, because she'll be watching.
To make sure that you're not lying and that you're all hers.
Well tell her, for me, that you are; you're not mine anymore.
And tell her that she better treat you what you're worth.

If you're wondering why I sent this letter, I'll tell you.
It's because I'm sorry I wasn't enough for you.
I'm sorry that I'm not enough yet, never will be.
But sorry isn't even enough either.

And if you've tossed this in the fireplace, or in the trash,
You've just thrown away the rest of my love.
Every ounce of love I had left, I sealed into this letter.
Hoping these words will flood your mind, and my love flood your heart.

I've realized why my love cannot fill your heart.
It's because your love for me wasn't in there at all.
My pool of love, so lonesome, glistening- evaporating.
I guess this is the last letter I'll ever send you."

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  • Sheilasbabygal4life
    October 26

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    This was a very strong piece you have written. Full of strong emotions and feelings. this was very good. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.

  • Marty-McFly
    October 24

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    Beautiful..i loved the style, i loved the emotion, and the rawness....i felt your feelings by the end of each stanza, and the lost hope you felt. Well done.

  • Marty-McFly
    October 23
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    Excellent :-) I look forward to reading what you produce.

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