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Take Me Now, Captain

It’d only be enough
If my chest cavity collapsed
And my lungs deflated empty
Like those puffery, flexing men's
Jock straps. And my guts got
Suckered out my ass.  And my intestines
Got all mashed-potatoes-and-peas (please!)
And then - alright - I guess I might tell him
He ought not to squeeze me
so good.

oh! - 
My god only might be so good if he
Would just lightning fucking bolt me
Now so I could step out of
This flesh and melt - closer - and into hell
To be the fuel, the embers - the ash! -
So I could burn and combust and
Scream love songs
to the righteous flames
of this sin. 

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  • evil-incarnate
    November 15
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    wow. this is insane but in a good way. as always, amazing descriptions, and the tone is...well the tone is what always keeps me reading and raving over your poetry so there you have it. great write


    • kathrynguyrocks
      November 15
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      thanks love you always give me a lil ego boost lol i really appreciate it


      • evil-incarnate
        November 17
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        I'm glad, see good work should be commended, so pretty much if i like it i'll tell you.=D