she falls asleep on nietzsche;
her hand rested on the shoulder of dove wings
she tells me she loves me with 3am whispers
and always wakes with a contagious smile
I'm smiling
and now even my poems are smiling.
In a list
A contest entry
- Where are you when you're over zenith? by Over Zenith.
700 points, ended November 7, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Short Deep Love Poems by Fire-Fly.
500 points, ended November 21, 30 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Dove's wings and 3am whispers - simply lovely.
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HAHA!! THIS WS REALLY GOOD I ENJOYED READING AND LOVE THE TITLE BY THE WAY!! WOW AGAIN WITH THE WHOLE MAKE EVERYTHING IN LIFE A POEM OF SOME SORT ...I LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! AWESOME WORK!
~JAYDAS~
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I love this - the ending has that happy-giddy feel. I miss that feeling.
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Wow. Sounds like somebody's in love.
This is wonderful Matt. It's great how you can go from bleak commentaries on society to completely innovative love poems. I've never seen anyone write love poems that so thoroughly avoid cliche and still really work!
You are incredibly talented.
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baww!
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a genuine keeper...this poem feels soft, intimate, and surprisingly tender. And yes, like everyone else below me, I'm smiling.
L
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Well this just makes me smile, plain and simple. You're spreading around the best flu I've ever caught. The simpleness of it all and its brevity make this very appealing. Plus, it seems you've got just the type a girl I'd like to have around.
I really liked the second stanza, I can just imagine a smile creeping on the girl's face when she comes to terms with her surroundings and it gives her that simply content feeling. Which, in turn, clearly would make you feel on top of the world.
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last three lines made me say "awwww" in the most embarrassing, girly voice ever
haha. and I love your description of "with 3am whispers"; phenomenal
i want to give you more than 3 applause for this, but AP won't allow it >.<
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...i hate to say it, but... Awww... This is sweet. and kind of adorable. It's good to have someone to make you smile And that she is not a detriment to your writing is all the better
Stay happy. Well Written. Bravo.
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hmmmm...and all your readers are smiling too. love and smile go together and my, are they contagious!! i like this so-called "sappy" poems of yours!
~ Nicolette
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Your first line rocks the shit out of first lines.
"and now even my poems are smiling."
You're disgusting.
It's such a good, good line though.
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thanks. & yeah i know i am..hence the "sappy" label lol
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this is one of your best romantic writes. i knew there was someone who was making you smile... i just know those things as you well know i do. i can see her smiling, too. well, not physically on her face, but i can. it is so nice to see that on you and in your words, too. you deserve that and i see that she thinks that too. adding to my keepers list.
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I loved it... And it made me smile... And my insides went "awwwww"... And my fingers started searching the empty side of my bed for a hand to hold...
(As much as I loved it, a tiny part of me hates you right now...)
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Wow Matt.. a lil nip by the love bug get ya?
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Awww sometimes they smile
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and so am I...
see?
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awwww.
this is wonderful.
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oh geez. X)
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Aww, I’m meltingggggg. I love that you’re smiling and that your poems are smiling – it makes me smile too
Haha, I usually fall asleep on my phone but Nietzsche sounds much more appealing
Can’t say I blame the girl
Beautifulllll poem. It's getting "bookmarked" inside my ribs 
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this is quickly becoming an epidemic.
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Awwwwww this melts my heart and makes me smile in all of my loneliness! So beautiful.
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see! it is contagious lol..the smiles are spreading
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