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Itsy Bitsy Spider

Itsy Bitsy spider
crawled into her mouth
and just a few weeks later,
all the babies crawled back out.


Some went in her nose;
others played in her ears.
With Itsy Bitsy creeping close
showing no mercy or fears.


It was an hour for the witching
and fuzzy legs were all about;
Itsy Bitsy- eight eyes watching
as she began to scream and shout.


A web of deceitful tricks;
another sac of fresh laid eggs;
Itsy's bite was nice and slick
all up and down her legs.


Itsy Bitsy spider
knew she had to run;
Miss Muffet sat beside her
smiling her Halloween fun.

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Eh, so I'm twisted!

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  • mcheadle
    1 day ago
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    This is a scream for help. Merch me ther are

    Itsy Bitsie Spiders crawling all over me...mac i hate spiders hate then to pieces-- there goes a let, then another three legs here and the goes one with a body.


    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      1 day ago
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      I hate spiders too. Them and heights are the only real material fears I have. But it worked for the time of year I wrote it. Just had to close my eyes and type
      Thanks for the comments.

      Storm


  • Vhoori
    October 27

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    This is awesome! I like it. Very creepy, and the thought of spiders laying eggs in someone and all the spiders biting her all over is a thought that I never would have smiled at until I read this poem. Nice rhyming, and it was a treat, especially this close to Halloween.


    Emily

    I'm gunna read some more of your poetry now.


  • Master Ktulu silver member
    October 24

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    OMG!!!!!!!!!!!

    this is frightfully spooky Storm. I have a natural fear of hairy spiders so I could only imagine a hairy tarantula and now I have the heeby geebies lol

    **Master Ktulu**

    • StormGoddess Greeters member
      October 24
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      Spiders are probably the only material phobia I have, but I couldn't resist writing it lol

      Thanks for the comments


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    October 23
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    lol

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