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bored
no where
stuck in here
help me get out
im just so
very completely
bored

have you ever been stuck in class with only work to do and realise being bored is worse than everybody originally thought it was?!

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  • Melee Vau gold member
    October 25

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    seems to be something that we all go through - are we bored with life? or bored with ourselves? like this short poem which leaves lots to think about. good work!


    • loudlady
      October 25
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      or

      are just bored of it all waiting for a new existance to pop up block our way or miander betwix our lives to just add some difference!


  • xeroabyss II
    October 24
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    Wait till you graduate up, into a deadend job.

    • loudlady
      October 25

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      mmhhmm

      sounds absolutely exhilerating you know what you do then just to make it more fun find another job (doesnt matter what type) and for kicks (litterally) drop kick ur boss out the window


      • xeroabyss II
        October 26
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        Ha!
        If only it were so easy.
        Not always another job to find, but always plenty of assault charges to be filed


  • Olivias Violin
    October 23
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    During which subject are you bored? just curious

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