"Its not good for you", Mom warned Jane as she decided to marry John.
"Leave me alone, I'm HIV positive", shouted John.
"Your presence a second thousand lives for me, your absence a second billion deaths of mine- vacant spoiled life visible, throwing love for colorful future visible but the truth honey my love invisible", thought and sighed Jane.
A glass half empty
invisible belting mid--
milk allures the eyes
Author notes
Haibun- a prose poem on the given prompt
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie. by Mango Memories.
400 points, ended October 26, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything & Everything!!! by Sheilasbabygal4life.
700 points, ended November 10, 160 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This was short and good. I enjoyed reading ths. Thaks for entering and best ofl uck too yu in the contest.
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Brillant!
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Thank you
Thanks dear
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