Woke up in the cold morning of the day that would change my life
The sad day that I found what people would describe as "love"
The happy day I felt I was released from this world
And was given the unique chance to fly freely above
It truly was the day the Earth stood still
It truly was the day I thought I had found the infinite happiness rill
I recall when I first saw her
I couldn't believe my own young eyes
Victims of an enchanting master
My heart stopped but my blood rushed faster
My legs shook like never before but I stood static
My brain was fully aware of what was happening but I had no reaction,
I was feeling automatic
She had long dirty blonde hair, skinny jeans
She had hypnotic brown eyes, the most perfect of the teens
Wearing black, red, yellow Converse All Stars, she had an unconfusionable way of walking
Moving her beautiful lips, she had a magic way of talking
Captivated me with her soft words
And we soon became close friends
In conversation moments she seemed crystal clear what I wanted her to be
"She looks and talks like she cares",
I thought with no guarantee
Angelical look but Prada is what she wears
We went through good and bad times
She had a stupid boyfriend and I had no life
She was basically everything I could see
It was her who I wanted to be my beloved wife
But I had no strenght to fight
Friendship's everything she wanted
And still to this day I don't know if our friendship is right
Or if it's just badly haunted
Spent lonely dark days in my tiny bedroom
Knowing she wasn't the right girl for me
But tirelessly I still went after her
And endlessly she made me cry a river, a sea
With help of close friends I finally saw what was good
She's not the right woman for me, she's not what I truly need
I'm happy I escaped on time from the Devil's seed
Sympathetic and all, but many things are lies
Talk for hours and hours but no more as before it satisfies
So I've learnt a valuable lesson
That love is indeed an unfair game
So I'll be prepared and stay unbound for the rest of my life
For something wicked this way already came
Author notes
This is based around a girl i loved and she not being what i really thought .. was feeling creative so decided to make a poem about it
hope you like it
Thoughts?
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Welcome to AllPoetry
I think it helps when you learn the lessons; sometimes few do and it makes it that much more difficult however you seem to have gained alot of thought, patience and awareness from your experience with love
This is very creative, vivid and all around a fantastic poem 
I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us
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Stay safe
~Manda
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im sorry
this is sad but i can say i understand how you feel
i went through the same thing and it was hard
i love the way you wrote about it though. -
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Thanks =]
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