If I could touch the world and fix the hurt.
I would shield the pain of life long trades.
To give my all and make it plain
My life my soul my everything.
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Comments
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A splendid and insightful
write Tanya ! I share your
thoughts in this , if I could
touch the world and fix the
hurt ... lovely !!
Best wishes & hugs ,
Friend Easy
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the magical and wondrous unknown. The wanting and the desire to fix what might be broken. The unconditional love that eats us alive, little by agonizing little. Great Poem T! I really enjoyed it. I hate it when a really talented poet forces me to think.
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This is such a beautiful and lovely piece.
The picture goes amazingly with your write.
"If I could touch the world and fix the hurt.
I would shield the pain of life long trades."
I'm sure a lot of people feel this way.
Thank you for sharing this.
Great job =)
-Kati Anne
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