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To This

Only this could make me think
Of you, and all those times
We let our love fill up the cup
Of bliss, until the glow
Of the candlelight
Heated the night,
Until the glow
Of love's reflected light
Made everything alright.
Two hearts that never can
Connect again,
In quite the same way.
Our simple times together
Have all passed away.
It seemed so easy then
To drink our fill of love,
Enjoying every kiss
We never knew
What we would miss.

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  • mstklz78
    October 27

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    Awesome

    Very heartbreaking to think of having tasted love but then loosing it and seeing the one you have tasted with everyday and the only taste you get is from dinner you may or may not share. That is not what I want in my life and I hope adventure and many wonders will find. I love this poem and how it goes from flames of passion to the void and embers but more emphasis was put on the heat of passion and simple pleasures. It's agonizing to read, that's for the emotional stimulation.


  • Justice Morton
    October 25
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    This is another sad poem, you may relate to it based on this one. Enjoy.


  • Justice Morton
    October 25
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    Great

    Ahhh, very sad indeed. But yet this is a beautiful write, great job getting your emotion accross. Thank you for writing.


  • World So Cold
    October 24
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    Coolness!