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Strip Rummy

We played a game of strip rummy,
You dealt first and my hand was crummy;
I won that hand anyway--
You no longer wanted to play!
I then made you take off your shirt--
Hey, isn't this fun?  And, it doesn't hurt!
We played another hand or two,
You now have to take off your socks and shoes!
You start to whine, you start to moan,
I just grin, and you start to groan!
In a short while, you take off your pants--
Looks to me like you haven't got a chance!
You no longer have anything on,
I've won every hand, your clothes are all gone!
You are now totally bare--
We start to laugh, you say it's not fair!
That was fun!  Let's play cards again!
Let me know--you just say when!

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  • Storminbrenda silver member
    November 12
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    Lol poor partner who lost their clothes very funny leave it as it is it's perfect and made me