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Sweet Surrender

Skin to skin within the candle's glow;
Wet anticipation where ecstasy will grow.
Entwined in passion, combined as one
Enticing the senses to slowly come undone.
Taunted with touches, pleasurable tease


Slaking the want of love's deepest needs.
Uninhibited, each caress takes control-
Relinquishing desires of the inner soul.
Rhapsody in a rhythm, creating vibration;
Enveloped in our heat-rising sensation.
Naughty turns nice with ecstasy's ride;
Deeper, each moment felt inside.
Escort me to euphoria, moving  together;
Rupturing lust in sweet surrender.

Author notes

Used Sweet Surrender, obviously.
May not be what you're looking for- throw it out if it isn't. Hey it's early here

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  • Vhoori
    October 27

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    Wow. This is very hot. Inticingly descriptive and overall, completely what an erotic poem should be. Your use of words made a big effect on how this poem went. Very nice! Keep it up.


    Emily


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    October 23

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    Oh this is perfect!
    A fine, fine sharing this is; very sensual and so tastefully written!
    (Excellent acrostic, too! )
    Thank you for sharing and for being part of the contest!
    The best to you!!!!