For fuck sake,
I don't know where I stand with you.
How to feel,
How to act,
What to do.
I have nobody to tell.
So I'll scream it at you.
You give me an affectionate gesture;
I return it, you reject mine.
I don't return it, you stop yours.
You treat me like your girl,
I am significant.
More than any other girl.
But I'm just a friend.
But am I?
So I'm confronting you.
So I'm asking you.
How will I ever get a boyfriend?
You are that figure in my life.
How could I ever stand you with another girl?
Because I'm not that figure in your life.
You are so unclear to me.
So many mixed signals.
So I'm confronting you.
So I'm asking you.
I'm sick of being messed with.
..But I don't want to loose you.
Ever.
I love you.
With all my heart.
And you are killing me.
A contest entry
- Vent. by Walking Oxymoron.
400 points, ended November 21, 59 entries
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Comments
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Hurrah. Amazing Dani Doll.
Better that i know how its about!
Love you always.
xoxo -
I love this. Emotional, desparation.
I havent heard from you in AGES. SOO glad to have you back
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I really like it, there is a lot of good emotion and express in it which makes it interesting from the first line to the last one, you chose a good way to start oof the poem because it captures the reader immediatley and pulls them in
I love you.
With all my heart.
And you are killing me.
this was a good way to the poem it was interesting and very powerfull exxcellent work
-mmm-
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