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Lips - Haiku

Lips on her white skin
A subtle blush on her cheeks
A soft moan escapes

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  • PurringKitten silver member
    October 26

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    hummmmm

    lovely! simply lovely! short, sweet and softly passionate...i love a good Haiku and this is perfect...thank you kindly for sharing it with us and for taking the time to enter...