she once made ripples in the cosmos;
river kisses speak nothing of past grandeur.
before
she found herself most comfortable
ever changing,
molded of clay and possibilities.
this was before fire
comparing herself to the sun,
a spark took her pride and spent it
on a mortal self, prone to shattering
unused to being
delicate
she walks on water now.
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Prompt: Evening By, by INnsanity @ deviantart.com
60 words exactly
A contest entry
- she was a goddess once.. by JinSays.
1103 points, ended November 11, 12 entries
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oh yes. I love this one. Thank you for taking the time to enter, and I wish you all the best.
love,
jin


