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History Ramblings (Part 5)

An extension of the mind,
is a dream.
And my dreams foreshadow,
it all.
I wish I could sleep,
to dream.
To know the end.
Cause my mind,
is an extension,
of a dream

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  • killergorilla
    October 23

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    hey man read them all in sequence and it went alot better then reading it back to front
    (obviosly XD)
    i especially liked the first two parts as i can relate to them alot
    nice work
    post more soon


  • taylorndncar gold member
    October 23

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    excellent...! thoroughly enjoyable and well-written. i like the "beginning-meeting-the-end" a metaphoric circle, where dream is the future, but the present won't let you sleep to dream...! very good effort; this one is a keeper...!