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Fire

Wide eyes
Dry and bright
Wide with fear
Bright with wonder

She breathes in ash

Air filled with dead carbon
Fills the space between her fingers
And whistles through her hair

She doesn't blink

Who could look away when the world is burning?

Her town so familiar
Is visited by an intruding stranger

She cannot stop it
Nor can she look away

The sky
A black-orange bruise
Is coming towards her
Like ink it reaches across her town
And drowns the world
In endless flames

So she stands
with her eyes wide
and watches
San Diego burn

Author notes

every few years san diego burns. this is the first memory i have of it

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