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Judy

Judy is an angel without wings

Uriel said, God is my light

Demons are cast down the pit

Your prayer a rose unto Him

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  • daffodilblossom
    2 hours ago
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    i like the length and meaning


  • lovlilmystery
    October 25

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    Beautiful, my friend. And many of the words, have so much meaning behind them. Like: an angel without wings. That is beautiful and easy to visualize this. She is a lucky lady, to have you as a friend. I sometimes wish, I was so blessed, with someone. But I am not unhappy, with my lot in life. Keep writing these beautiful pieces. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


  • BonnieQ silver member
    October 23

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    Gorgeous

    As short as this is, the visual are astounding and, of course, the phrasing exquisite, dear brother. And, I see that Judy has seen it and left a rose for you! Way to go! Indeed, God is her light, as He is mine.

    Much love & hugs, SisBon


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 23
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    you spoke of love and and Gods wings Angelo
    beautiful gift to a special one hugs always Angel♥


    • Angelo di Luce gold member
      October 23
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      Thank you, as always your reviews are favorable dear poetess
      Blessings and light


  • Jalalbad gold member
    October 23
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    thank you for drawing to attition my wingless state. The back biters bite off my wings. I hope You be pleased to know I am in the process of growing new ones. Its a pain in the back though. Have to preen all day long to keep the molt from itching my skin.

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