the kingfisher
stalls'n rolls
into a blue bolt,
shoots into the pond'n
shoots
up into the sunlight, fleeing
a sprinkle of beads
on water, holding
in its beak, flapping,
a fish--
you!
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A contest entry
- IT"S MY BIRTHDAY!!! WEEEEEEEEEE by Cinnarry.
5750 points, ended November 9, 15 entries
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Comments
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Made me just smile wide with delight. Thank you.
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Well now this was an interesting take on a birthday wish for Cinn.
I'm sure she will appreciate your entry, best of luck to you... Scott 
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I picked this contest at random, at one of those moments when one feels at the top of the world. Many many happy returns to Cinn. -
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