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clouded thoughts


I come in from the rain
to talk about my youth
I sit now in my pain
to tell the world my truth

I talk about my past
like it was only yesterday
cos maybe deep inside
I've still not found my way

as I look for something more
but I may never find
for a past that feels so raw
buried in my mind

as I lay there in the night
inside the visons of my dreams
I wake up in the morning
with my mind splitting at the seems

six billon other souls
do they all feel the same
lost inside this place
feeling so insane

as I sit here writing lines so real
the naked truth so clear
as I run inside my clouded thoughts
of another broken tear

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