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louisiana, gas station, 1am (the handshake syndrome)

"have a nice night y'all"

i did smile back
and wondered if she saw her cliche
clawing down my steel spine
like a kitten on a blackboard

sure, i knew it was coming
i had seen it (on tv)

we buy into that now in the uk
the whole nine yards

i don't blame anyone
least of all the innocent

i could barely conceal my irony
as i said "cheers love"
and her pearl eyes sort of
awww...i dunno

whispered words of our ancestors

"these cunts have us by the bollocks
they have ground us down for centuries
motherfookin'cuntfacedsonofabitches!"

i squeezed out a
"have a nice night now"
as i slid out into the humid darkness

i am fooked if i thought i heard...

"cheers love"


(sarcastic motherfookincuntfaced bitch).








Author notes

people are people
i find the further i travel, i realise
we are all the same really

peace on you
xxxxx

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Comments

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  • Tzipora
    November 1
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    wow. how did i not roll upon you sooner. this write is pure genius. i seriously loved it.


  • Floorboards
    October 26
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    Heeheehee.


  • IronIcecream
    October 23
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    wisdome cums travellin
    if you never mind the bollocks
    but if you never mind them
    there's no wisdome

    have a nice chat


  • Cannonsfire
    October 23

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    Well damn it, we are all the same lol and 'downunder' we wouldn't have done it under our breath either


  • NurseChilly gold member
    October 23

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    hehehehhehehehhheheheh
    smirks and smiles
    - ask suzi about the time in walmart when i told the girl at the counter i didn't want a nice day!!!! - pissin' miself!!! lololololol

    grand
    smirks
    smirks
    funny shit

  • pocket pixie gold member
    October 23
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    okiedokie doggie daddy


  • jantastic gold member
    October 23
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    hehe

    cheers love

    tell sooze the usual

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