some things are best left unsaid
because we know what has happened
when...
we have watched tv,
gotten wasted on
a good bottle of red or three
and then let the fingers
fly upon keyboards
while the minds of two
wandered
only to be woken the next morning
to a tirade of insanity
dotted across the ether
a Sunday afternoon would never be enough
for we had seven weeks to cram,
fold & toss caution to the wind
across two continents
not only our minds
but bodies and souls
wandered
were we (w)reckless?
some things are best left unsaid
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- Wreckless by Cannonsfire.
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The wind might know but when I listened it was on to newer events. All that truly counts is how it is written across your hearts and how much you seek to beat in unity. The rest is laughter, a few needed tears and perhaps a little moment of sober reflection before beginning the next bout of wine soaked madness.
Love,
Tom B.
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You know Tom, I don't think we have bouts lol it's sort of neverending with us lol
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Very interesting. Nice teasing write for those of us on the outside.
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man i should have been there.... great piece sis...
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lol, he said parse
ahh Juls, woken? wreckless...yep, I know all about this, but so much worse than that. I guess there's a fine line between wreckless and pure stupidity...lol, but I'd like to think back with a positive attitude.
yep.
lol
loves ya,
jin
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ok,, says nothing...best that way..
Good piece tho...have to say...clever, as always...
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good poem. parse and tight. nice.
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Very good stuff Juls.
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lol your background gave it away but even so...it wasn't wreckless enough and that's why I came back
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crap, I thought I had the black background grrrr
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yeah No! lol i have Jin saying that now LOL
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