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too much xanax

I

why do we say vermin
to explain rats
when we mean politicians

too afraid to be
or stipulate

be excommunicated
or a non voter

which by the way
can be preferable to death

II

i spoke to a stranger,
now he is not
and i wonder
if he had the choice
would he have wasted an hour

or driven the LA freeway
frustrated
without conversation

III

tomorrow
i will be more learned

a student of dreams
in awake periods
and numbness in sleep

and for those who don't care
i will listen to Tom Waits
understanding his drunkenness is a ploy
to fool the majority

and in the minority
will be me




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california red wine and too much sun lol

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  • zochit2me gold member
    October 25

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    If red wine does this...pass the bottle and no glass needed..I will simply chug it straight from the bottle

    You are a prolific writer Chez...deep ...no matter if you have wine in you or not.


    • Cannonsfire
      October 25
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      Ah Becky my friend, I would gladly share the bottle with you lol and I do hope to see a write from you in this contest before I get 'reckless' over 'wreckless' lol


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    October 23

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    lol ironically drunk poetry always makes so much sense...


  • Silent Cougar Moderators member
    October 23

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    your AN's say it all,,,just wasted...

    Another classic thinker from your quill tho..

  • i love your voice.

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