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Silhouette

seductive curves of virility
testifies to your fertility
voiding me of breath

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Your prompt: Beauty - limitation 12 words

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 24
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    excellent! i love the word play here and so connect with the silhouette voiding one of breath. very nicely done.


  • Stickboy gold member
    October 24

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    awww yes when looking at your loves silhoutte it is beautiful , best of luck in the contest
    Sean